Free Will

03 Aug

I posted this poem over at fictionpress today.  It is not great, and I don’t know whether I am going to work on it anymore or not; but it summed up how I feel sometimes. 

Why can’t you just
overwhelm me already.
You gave me free will
a wondrous gift to be sure.
But I don’t think I’m using it right.
Can’t you take it back please


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Posted by on August 3, 2009 in Poetry & Prose


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One response to “Free Will

  1. moonblue

    August 6, 2009 at 5:16 pm

    Amen brother!


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